Some hard difficulties to find the correct words

After I wrote the three versions of the paragraph I found some hard difficulties to  find the correct words to express the ideas with another tone. In fact, I understood that my vocabulary is mainly neutral and much reduced to change the sensations and feeling into the reader mind. I had to use the dictionary all the time to find better words to covey differently. The second problem I had was not to change the meaning of the original text, I am not sure if I did or not in the Humorous and sad text.

Original writing

Today movie is “Baby Driver”, It is the story about a young adult”baby”, that also is very good driver. He spend his time driving cars and listening music with earphones at the level that he is learned to read the people lips because he never takes off his earphones. This guy has a great heart,  but not really good friends. Someday, as he was a good driver, a well-known drug dealer and bank robber forced Baby to dive in an assault, the theft was successful grateful to Baby, after that the drug dealer used that boy to help them in many other illegal activities. However, the driver saw his activity as a way to save money to get married with his dream girl, a waitress who worked in a restaurant on the side of a state highway.

The movie argument is very difficult to support because Baby became a criminal, no matter what efforts the writer made to show his as a good boy. Along the movie there were several scenes where Baby performs good actions; I suppose to create the idea into the mind  viewer that the protagonist doesn’t deserve a punishment.

Humorous and informal

This is the story about a very nice guy who came into the hands of a bad boy. A drugs dealer who saw in to “Baby”, it is the alias of the protagonist, a great driver to do his bank assaults and scape with the loot. That guy “Baby” is an incredible driver, the movie is full of scenes where they can extremely scape form the police doing a lot of spectacular scape actions. Baby never takes off their earphones so the movie also has situations where he drives listening hard music. As I said, baby was a good boy, we wanted to get married with a beautiful waitress he known at a restaurant next to a highway.

The story is not believable but funny, nobody drives like him. But also, in deep he was not really a good boy.

Sad

Today movie is “Baby Driver”, It is the story about a young criminal named ”baby”, that has the ability to driver very well so he can escape from difficult situations . He spend his time driving cars and listening hard music with earphones at the level that he learned to read the people lips because he never takes them off his earphones. This guy diverted his good heart,  while share with his not really good friends. Someday, as he was a good driver, a well-known drug dealer and bank robber convinced Baby to dive in an assault, the theft was successful because Baby, after that the drug dealer used that boy to help them in many other illegal activities. The driver saw his activity as a way to save money to get married with his girl, a waitress who knew in a restaurant on the side of a state highway.

The movie argument is very difficult to support because Baby became a criminal, no matter what efforts the writer made to show his as a good boy. Along the movie there were several scenes where Baby performs good actions; I suppose to create the idea into the mind viewer that the protagonist doesn’t deserve a punishment.